Now this is what I am talking about! I loved the sounddesign. Many flash artist do not consider sound when they make animation. Sound is 50 % of the animation. So keep it up man.
I loved the evil dead reference! Good one!
Good humour, awful sound.
I liked the humour and the gags, but the sound just killed some of my joy. I can hear everytime you cut in the dialoge and it's annoying. Buy a better microphone and learn some things to get the sound up to your humour level. Because the rest was very good. The gags where cool, the choosing of characters was cool. The drawing was nice and the animation good. Just get the sound to a higher level and you will be unstoppable!
I really liked the style
I must say that the style of this submission impressed me. The drawings looked like storyboard drawings and I see that you have a great visual sense. I was wondering if you could do me a favour. You see, I'm a film student from Norway, and I was wondering if you could make a animation for a script I have written? It would help me to pursuade the theachers too make it ;)
Great animation and style!
This is a really nice piece of work. I can see that you are very good with creating different characters. The only thing I miss is a plot. It looks like you really have wroked out a nice world and characters. All you need is a story too get us (the audience) to really relate to the characters. I am a screenplay writer. Drop me a line if you want me to write a screenplay for you.
Good, but not scream out loud funny. I did however laugh at the voice acting. When the guy in the drive in screams: "Why are you ordering?" Because your not actually screaming. You kind of pretend to be screaming. I found that kind of funny.
Mediocre and the sound just killed it
It was funny I guess, but jesus christ, you gotto fix the sound. The voice was terrible quality and whats up with no music? Ads like that always have a overdone action theme.
Good animation, but bad sound.
The animation was very good, but lacking in the sound department. Where are all the sounds that I expect to hear? They are not there, creating a real big hole in the cartoon. I suggest that you work as hard on sound as you work on the animation. Sound will heighten your movies to a whole new level.. I'm serious... Watch professional cartoons. They put sound to everything! EVERYTHING! Do it!
But great job though, keep up the good work. ;)
Nice animation, but sound not so good
I did like this cartoon. The animation and style is very nicely done. I notice that what could help to make your cartoons 50% better is with better sound. What I'm talking about is in the fight scenes... It is really obvious that you have plastered a "cool and rocky" music on them and not cared to make any sounds. I was watching the fight scenes and thinking: "Wow, the animation and the action is really sweet here, but I miss all of the sounds that I'm expecting to hear." Don't get me wrong, I'm not hasseling your work, all I'm saying is that your cartoons will reach another level of greatness, if you don't get lazy on the soundwork.. keep it up.
Very very good storytelling
This was very good story telling indeed. I can see that the rythm of the cartoon is very solid and offers a good structure. The animation was seriously good. It looks and feel like a cut-scene in the old point-and-click adventure games. The graphics were in the same style as Monkey Island, Full Throttle, Broken Sword, etc. If I was to comment anything that I see could be better in this flash, I guess it would have to be the sound. The sound-design is not very "tight" in the flash. I don't know if this has something to do with the compressing of the movie. Some sounds that I expected to hear didn't come and kind of threw me off track a little. Like when the little fighter gets punched into the ring and flies towards the "The two ton terror". I was sortof expecting to hear a "Whoosh" sound or something. When the announcer on the left talks, I think his voice is a bad recording. You can hear all of your P's in the mic. Even better sound design could help your heighten your movie even more. But kudos on the scene where you reveal "The two ton terror", that was very good, in terms of the build up to the fight. All in all a seriously good animation. Great job.
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